Comments on: She http://talesfromme.wordpress.com/2008/05/18/83/ "Truth in her dress finds facts too tight.In fiction she moves with ease." ~Rabindranath Tagore, 'Stray Birds' Wed, 04 Nov 2009 11:50:24 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: நிலாரசிகன் http://talesfromme.wordpress.com/2008/05/18/83/#comment-169 நிலாரசிகன் Tue, 09 Sep 2008 05:10:16 +0000 http://talesfromme.wordpress.com/2008/05/18/83/#comment-169 //The blackness of the night was closing in on me. The darkness was comforting. Light, there were only two sources: one, from my side, that radiance of the sheen from her nails, that did not come from the reflection of the glow of her face, but from some fountain of life within. The other, from outside the window, as a clear white moon climbed up the sky, taking me with her, filling her with me.The two lights of the moment, the two lights of my life, shared their light with me; and I spoke with my shadows like the lights spoke with me.// Excellent! //The blackness of the night was closing in on me. The darkness was comforting. Light, there were only two sources: one, from my side, that radiance of the sheen from her nails, that did not come from the reflection of the glow of her face, but from some fountain of life within. The other, from outside the window, as a clear white moon climbed up the sky, taking me with her, filling her with me.The two lights of the moment, the two lights of my life, shared their light with me; and I spoke with my shadows like the lights spoke with me.//

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